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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

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PostSubject: my morning light   May 23rd 2011, 4:31 pm

Hello, haven't been around for a long while, so thought i'd post this. It was written for my gf ^^ (probably a bit rubbish lol)

My Morning Light

Hair shimmering off the gift of Zephyrus,
Blissful like heavenís silk, and
Almost like a waking dream, is
Your ethereal perfection

Smiles beneath the Sun Unconquered,
Soothing like divine promise, and
Eager like seventh heaven, does
Your countenance brighten

Reverberant in the heart of Aphrodite, and
Justified like Godly truth, and
Mirrored in the grace of Venus, is
Your beauty undimmed

Rejuvenating like morning dew, and
Melodic like the songs of birds,
Sweet like the grass cut new, all
Beneath a misty verve,
Drifting with the will of Zephyrus, and
Illumine like the Sun Unconquered,
Beating like the heart of Venus, oh how
Your presence lifts me just like the dawn
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