I won't say my opinion of the first one (gay). The figures are not that well structured.
The second is slightly odd. I however do not see anything in it. It is just -- odd.
I like the third one. It has a lot of interesting visuals that do seem to work together. I do not know your thoughts about it, but the third one does seem like it would be a good conversation piece. It might not be what your gf wanted, but she should be slightly proud of it.
Fantasy puts more requirements on the writer than any other fiction, because the world must be made as real before anything else can be real.
Adult Christian fiction quite different than all the usual lame stuff in that market. "Dilemma of Dreams" now in hard back.