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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: charger sonnet   June 27th 2015, 5:38 pm

Charger Sonnet

the horses on the pampas are more
friendly than the Russian horses on the steppe
and not as cold.
A Russian horse hates mankind and never expect
preferential treatment and will kick you
if you show leniency thinks you have an agenda.
An Argentinean horse is easier to tame, trained
right it will do the tango.

The Russian horse will kick you if you approach it
from the rear as it doesn’t like surprises.
it will never trust you and it has to be tethered,
yet it is a strong horse if ridden right.
The Argentinean horse will be pleasant and kind,
up to a point because it is so easily led astray for
an extra nose bag of hay.
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