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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Sundae Treat   September 5th 2008, 4:37 pm

V1

How about some whip cream baby
Pineapple rings and a cherry
Love is in the sundae, someday
I want to share my sundae with you (yes I do)
I can cream you for the thrill
Make your body tingle, your heart skip a beat
You know I can, you know I will
I can do things to you with just a kiss
Wrap your legs around me, tickle me with your feet
I have all the right ingredients

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Have a taste of my sundae all sticky sweet
With you , only with you
Iíll share my sundae treat
I know you, you can taste it too
I want to share my sundae, someday with you
How about some whip cream baby
Pineapple rings and a cherry
Love is in the sundae, someday
I want to share my sundae with you (yes baby I do)

V2

Do you trust me enough to close your eyes
Let me do what I will, itís all a surprise
Hand cuffs, whips and chains, are never a game
No switching between pleasure and pain
This is a passionate sundae thang
Letís make bittersweet memories
Maybe some sticky sweet fantasies
Either way would be ok
I want to share my sundae with you

C2

Have a taste of my sundae all sticky sweet
With you , only with you
Iíll share my sundae treat
I know you, you can taste it too
I want to share my sundae, someday with you
How about some whip cream baby
Pineapple rings and a cherry
Love is in the sundae, someday
I want to share my sundae
Melt in your mouth, all sticky sweet
Someday Iíll share my sundae with you

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PostSubject: Re: Sundae Treat   September 5th 2008, 4:48 pm

I love this song when you made it years ago sis .....I'm glad you find it.....

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PostSubject: Re: Sundae Treat   September 6th 2008, 2:49 am

You used simply words, but you managed to put them into the right place. Very nicely written. Two thumbs up!

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