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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Satan    March 11th 2016, 6:46 am

The Satan
  I will sit here and not move for an hour
 empty my brain of the past I refuse to look back
 nothing there worth remembering
except pristine fields of snow in the morning 
and put skis on the first boy in the whole world
crossing this area before the sheep were 
let out making the acre into a mess of yellow
dirty mass when looking for food, sharp narrow
hoofs trampling over my dream and I thought
of them as animals that had been rejected by
Lucifer and my grammar helper insist I had to
use the capital letter when addressing him this
fallen angel who is now winning the hearts and
the mind of the People of Europe who refuse to
help civilians who have lost everything, yet we
have lost more, say our human dignity.
We are like the people of Israel who are
sinking into the brutal oppression of the people
who are not of their blood and the future tell me

we will lose everything in heartless apathy.
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