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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Havana   March 21st 2016, 5:31 am

Havana
In the fifties, Havana was a gigantic whorehouse For the Americans,
and run by the Mafia and assorted businessmen, but down from
the mountain came to Fidel Castro and created a humane society.
We didnít like this Cuba should be a democracy that too often means t
he right of the rich to subjugate the weak the helpless and those in wheel chairs.†
So he was a communist then he who built a free health this secular pope
did this and made the best schools in the hemisphere in the face of harsh sanction
†from the USA.
The Obama with a horde of investors will be bringing glass pearls and shiny promises.
Do not succumb to consumerism but retain their pride in being the country that
won a fifty years old struggle against a bitter enemy
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