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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: enemy of cooks   April 2nd 2016, 6:39 am

Enemy of Cooks
 
I have a bullet taken out if a wall in the kitchen I treasure
it as it could so easily have made the end of me.
I a cook at a restaurant a person hated me and during
the night fired shot into the kitchen there were ricochets 
hitting a crawly thing its tiny blood plastered the wall.
I didn`t know what to do so I took to wearing sunglasses
when it was raining and when I fell on the bus people
helped me up it is too late telling them I`m not blind.
When collared as a spy I said I had only peeled carrots
and doing the washing up and at times had sex with
the female cook over the potato peeling machine I was
 asked why you said female it is not PC, but I do not
Want to fuck a man so why can I not say so?
There was this man at a communal pissing place
offering to give me a blow –job I declined and when he
came out I took his wallet and went to a whorehouse.
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