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PostSubject: The Revenge of a mistress   April 18th 2016, 5:53 am

The Mistress`Revenge
Fog and rain full light on car and dark asphalt road
The house opposite is for sale through an agency
One of the salesmen takes his mistress there
During the week but never on Saturday or Sundays
It must be terrible to be a mistress.
Always hidden and eats with her lover where no one knows them
Then sex on a hard camp bed
Tells her h loves her and will divorce his wife, the problem is
The house and the kids
She knows where his wife lives it is a big house and a large garden
She used to know this could be hers
A dream is slowly dying resentment fills her once loving heart
And one day soon she will talk
And the man will lose his property, wife and his mistress
And being stupid he will walk the streets and wonder why

No one loves him anymore
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