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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: dream homes   June 17th 2016, 5:35 am

Dream Homes 
 
After the sandy beach, the fenland with birds, foxes, rabbits, woods and ponds,
 unspoilt by developers; but no more, real estate, condos,
have turned over the land like rancid butter, green lawns, soft grass, but not a cow
in sight, here only inedible golf balls fall.
Come buy an apartment good investment for you and the family, no one loses, why
have one home when you can have four.
Thousands of empty homes only used a few days a year watched over by bored
 security guards; poverty is unseen here it has been eradicated, there is no need for
you to seek places where people live in shacks and under dirty plastic
unless you are seeking redemption for living a life of plenty
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