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PostSubject: the peace process   September 3rd 2016, 5:41 am

The Peace Process
I don’t know where I`m going with this
but there is peace in Colombia, the Marxist rebels lost
and their sexy women soldiers in green fatigue and
weapons in arms will hand it all in for fashion  magazines
Hair- dressing salons and babies in arms.
For women, a change from war to peace is easy to make
it will be worse for men who feel inferior without guns.
If Texas as an example had been a gun free zone you would
have ended up with tall queens as cow-hands,
or what do I know left their oil wells and gone to Montana.
 
So why did the Marxist lose, cocaine I think more economical
beneficial, cash in hands better than a Marxist  bible on the roof
 28 years of peace the political parties in Colombia will have
no consensus as the blamed is car mechanics or ranchers
Everything is possible from the first female president in Colombia
or and openly gay governor in Texas.
Festive dresses and bulls with flowers on horns will be marching

 down the Avenue in Houston.
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