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PostSubject: Ongoing Collaboration   July 18th 2008, 4:57 am

This is the place where we'll create a poem together. Everyone will post four lines which are compatible with the four lines the person wrote before. After a certain number of verses will we start a new one.

I'll start us off...


I feel the sea breeze
going through my hair
while I'm down on my knees
with you my feelings I share

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PostSubject: Re: Ongoing Collaboration   July 18th 2008, 4:56 am

I feel the sea breeze
going through my hair
while I'm down on my knees
with you my feelings I share

I sit and stare
into your beautiful eyes
Nothing but love
To me it wasn't a surprise

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PostSubject: Re: Ongoing Collaboration   July 18th 2008, 4:57 am

I feel the sea breeze
going through my hair
while I'm down on my knees
with you my feelings I share

I sit and stare
into your beautiful eyes
Nothing but love
To me it wasn't a surprise

I never would have thought
to love someone so much
But what heaven has me brought
is an angel with sensational touch

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PostSubject: Re: Ongoing Collaboration   July 18th 2008, 4:57 am

I feel the sea breeze
going through my hair
while I'm down on my knees
with you my feelings I share

I sit and stare
into your beautiful eyes
Nothing but love
To me it wasn't a surprise

I never would have thought
to love someone so much
But what heaven has me brought
is an angel with sensational touch

An angel I'm not
I do understand your feelings
Whenever we meet at this beautiful spot
Your love always leaves me reeling

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PostSubject: Re: Ongoing Collaboration   July 18th 2008, 4:58 am

I feel the sea breeze
going through my hair
while I'm down on my knees
with you my feelings I share

I sit and stare
into your beautiful eyes
Nothing but love
To me it wasn't a surprise

I never would have thought
to love someone so much
But what heaven has me brought
is an angel with sensational touch

An angel I'm not
I do understand your feelings
Whenever we meet at this beautiful spot
Your love always leaves me reeling

The connection between us
is beyond everything we're wishing for
Each others hearts we possess
never again alone anymore

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PostSubject: Re: Ongoing Collaboration   July 18th 2008, 10:25 pm

I feel the sea breeze
going through my hair
while I'm down on my knees
with you my feelings I share

I sit and stare
into your beautiful eyes
Nothing but love
To me it wasn't a surprise

I never would have thought
to love someone so much
But what heaven has me brought
is an angel with sensational touch

An angel I'm not
I do understand your feelings
Whenever we meet at this beautiful spot
Your love always leaves me reeling

The connection between us
is beyond everything we're wishing for
Each others hearts we possess
never again alone anymore

I like the sound of forever.
But is this a dream or real?
Will we always be together?
Or will it fade how we feel?

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PostSubject: Re: Ongoing Collaboration   July 18th 2008, 11:12 pm

I feel the sea breeze
Going through my hair
While I'm down on my knees
With you my feelings I share

I sit and stare
Into your beautiful eyes
Nothing but love
To me it wasn't a surprise

I never would have thought
To love someone so much
But what heaven has me brought
Is an angel with sensational touch

An angel I'm not
I do understand your feelings
Whenever we meet at this beautiful spot
Your love always leaves me reeling

The connection between us
Is beyond everything we're wishing for
Each others hearts we possess
Never again alone anymore

I like the sound of forever.
But is this a dream or real?
Will we always be together?
Or will it fade how we feel?

What we feel in our hearts
Can not be denied
Here and now is where it starts
And soon we'll be groom and bride

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PostSubject: Re: Ongoing Collaboration   July 18th 2008, 11:41 pm

I feel the sea breeze
Going through my hair
While I'm down on my knees
With you my feelings I share

I sit and stare
Into your beautiful eyes
Nothing but love
To me it wasn't a surprise

I never would have thought
To love someone so much
But what heaven has me brought
Is an angel with sensational touch

An angel I'm not
I do understand your feelings
Whenever we meet at this beautiful spot
Your love always leaves me reeling

The connection between us
Is beyond everything we're wishing for
Each others hearts we possess
Never again alone anymore

I like the sound of forever.
But is this a dream or real?
Will we always be together?
Or will it fade how we feel?

What we feel in our hearts
Can not be denied
Here and now is where it starts
And soon we'll be groom and bride

That is a sweet thought
And if what you say is true
You will be my husband, I your wife
And in God's eyes we'll say I do!

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PostSubject: Re: Ongoing Collaboration   July 24th 2008, 12:23 am

Lets start a new one!

I'm standing next to a fountain
And wind goes through my hair
On the edge of this mountain
With God a tear I share

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PostSubject: Re: Ongoing Collaboration   July 26th 2008, 11:49 am

I'm standing next to a fountain
And wind goes through my hair
On the edge of this mountain
With God a tear I share

You seem to be upset
What is the problem?
Do you have any regrets?
There is a un-promised tomorrow

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PostSubject: Re: Ongoing Collaboration   July 26th 2008, 4:26 pm

I'm standing next to a fountain
And wind goes through my hair
On the edge of this mountain
With God a tear I share

You seem to be upset
What is the problem?
Do you have any regrets?
There is a un-promised tomorrow

Any regrets I do not have
And will never in my life
Always be proud of what you did
And that I am, especially of my wife!

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PostSubject: Re: Ongoing Collaboration   August 18th 2008, 8:46 pm

I'm standing next to a fountain
And wind goes through my hair
On the edge of this mountain
With God a tear I share

You seem to be upset
What is the problem?
Do you have any regrets?
There is a un-promised tomorrow

Any regrets I do not have
And will never in my life
Always be proud of what you did
And that I am, especially of my wife!

So you've never cheated?
Never even looked?
Do you play us for fools?
Her heart is the only one you've took?
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PostSubject: Re: Ongoing Collaboration   September 3rd 2008, 10:58 pm

Her heart is the only one I've took
And the only one I want
She loves to read a book
And she is a great aunt

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