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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Free With Broken Chains   November 25th 2008, 1:55 pm

Free With Broken Chains
You thought you could bolt me to the wall
You thought you could control me
The truth is that I can easily break free
Now the chains and terms you put upon me
Are broken, broken, and I am free, free, free

^Chorus^
You can't control me
You can't stop me
I free, free with broken chains
You can't chain me up again
Cause I'm free, yeah
^Chorus end^

You thought the safest measure
was to stop me
You tried put me in that dark room
And you thought that it would stop me
Control me
But you were wrong you lied to yourself

^chorus repeat^
^chorus end^

Now you can't stop me
Now you should run away from me
And don't come near me because
I am not going be so nice
I am going to use these chains of
mine to stop, suffocate you
Love you, destroy you
I am going to chain you
Destroy you because that
is what I do

^chorus repeat
^chorus end^

*Music plays till the end*
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PostSubject: Re: Free With Broken Chains   March 5th 2009, 3:15 pm

loved it through. would like to know what kind of music would go with it
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