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PostSubject: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   January 14th 2009, 2:51 pm

A rock style song, but its more alternative then any of my other songs. Well alternative mixed with metal and you'll realize soon enough.
Well it starts off alternative, but turns to metal quickly. <---I know I have changed what I have done three times, it's just hard for me to explain

It's Been So Long

*slow guitar with drums*
It's been so long
since we have walked
together and talked together
It's been so long that I have
even forgotten your name

Let's talk, and let's wonder
this wonderful world life
Let's watch the sunset and let's
watch the midnight dawn

*guitar picks up paste in that alternative style way*

^chorus^
We have forgotten the closeness
of each other, we have forgotten
each other's wonderful
aroma, let's meet up soon
^chorus end^

*guitar slows down again*

I have forgotten.....HOLD IT!
You think that I really think
this crap, you really think
that I care about YOU

*guitar gets harder*

Well stick your ego up your
ass, I don't give shit what you
think

You're just like a spider on the web and
I'll rip your legs off

^chorus version 2^
Fuck you
Fuck you
Fuck me and fuck you
I don't care just get my hair
Fuck you
^chorus end^

*mean guitar plays for a while*

Aw, isn't that cute you thought
we were FRIENDS
You thought I actually cared
by I rather you DEAD

You wanna know what you
have done, no I won't
tell you, don't act like
the fool I know you
aren't

You just wanna seem innocent
You just wanna blame it
all on me
well it ain't happening
you stinking BITCH

^chorus version 2 repeats^
^chorus end^

Don't think for a second

Don't whisper for a second

I no longer want to hear your excuses

Don't fuck me with me

Don't touch me

Don't contact me

Just forget it

Forget it

FUCK OFF

*guitar plays till end*
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PostSubject: Re: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   January 14th 2009, 4:06 pm

This was kinda funny to tell the truth.
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PostSubject: Re: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   January 14th 2009, 4:43 pm

Urs wrote:
This was kinda funny to tell the truth.

Can you explain?

lol!
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PostSubject: Re: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   January 15th 2009, 12:17 am

Sure.

It starts off with the typical love song lyrics that show that men have feelings too, this whole "I miss you" type set up.

Then it switches, like the guy is realizing that he is just saying words because that is what he thinks he is supposed to do, but "wakes up" half way though the song and realizes that he never did miss the girl,

It was all a hoax to him, and he just felt that he was supposed to miss her.

I liked that, it was like this "Coming to realization" type song.

I think most guys have had a relationship where after they broke up, they first felt "hurt" but then realized that, leaving this woman was the best thing they ever did, and it was not like "Slow" but like "Slap in the face"

Which is why I liked this song, it was like he starts off.

"I miss you.. I miss you... I miss...

and then you almost can smile when you see that it "Hits him" and he is

I... Umm.. Miss.. Umm... You know what.. No I don't, go away and die"

And I just laughed when I saw that.

Might just be my life however.

Might just be me.
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PostSubject: Re: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   January 15th 2009, 12:33 am

Okay, then that's good.
That was what I was trying to get out.
I thought it was bad funny.
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PostSubject: Re: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   January 15th 2009, 7:46 am

I'm sorry, but I took a completely different meaning away from the song.

I took it to be the guy was just playing with her and telling her what he knew she wanted to hear so as to set her up for greater pain when he told her to fuck off and die.

To me it makes the singer look petty, like he can't get over past pains, which apparently took place so long ago and after a relationship that was so short or meaningless it is believable that he forgot the chick's name.

I can't say that made me like or dislike the song. It just sort of read to me like what some people would call stereotypical male behavior.
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PostSubject: Re: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   January 15th 2009, 3:56 pm

HYdraMStar wrote:
I'm sorry, but I took a completely different meaning away from the song.

I took it to be the guy was just playing with her and telling her what he knew she wanted to hear so as to set her up for greater pain when he told her to fuck off and die.

To me it makes the singer look petty, like he can't get over past pains, which apparently took place so long ago and after a relationship that was so short or meaningless it is believable that he forgot the chick's name.

I can't say that made me like or dislike the song. It just sort of read to me like what some people would call stereotypical male behavior.



Well I had been in this relationship with this girl. And it was actually her playing around with me.
She said she loved me and that I was the only one, but I found out when she was with me she had five other boyfriends.
Then we broke up, that was a couple years ago.
She recently sent me this e-mail saying, "I missed you, let's go get a drink together"
And that is what inspired this song.
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PostSubject: Re: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   January 15th 2009, 9:06 pm

Oh that just has to suck.
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PostSubject: Re: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   January 15th 2009, 9:30 pm

Wow, polygamy at 15 (assuming you two are the same age) and drinking at 17, this is my kind of girl... Seriously though that experience no doubt sucked for you. It does sound like she might feel bad about it. Why else would she contact you? But I don't blame you for wanting nothing to do with her.
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PostSubject: Re: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   January 16th 2009, 11:51 am

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Why else would she contact you?

I would wager for the same reasons why a man would do that, and "feeling bad about what they did" has nothing to do with it.

But that is my feelings on that issue.

and if I knew Leaka better, I might give him some "manly" advice.
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PostSubject: Re: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   January 16th 2009, 12:51 pm

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It does sound like she might feel bad about it. Why else would she contact you?
This girl isn't like that. She won't feel bad about anything.
At least two of the boys she was dating with me on the side, were ex's.
There is no way I was or am going to get played again.


Or have anyone else get played.
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PostSubject: Re: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   January 16th 2009, 3:36 pm

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HYdraMStar wrote:
Why else would she contact you?

I would wager for the same reasons why a man would do that, and "feeling bad about what they did" has nothing to do with it.


And you'd more likely then not lose the bet.

Most teenage girls who run around and/or sleep with a lot of different guys are doing it because something is emotionally missing in their lives (no father, they don't feel pretty enough, etc. etc.), not because they are horny teenagers like can be safely assumed about most of their male counterparts.

And don't let the way they might act, touch and uncaring, fool you. Girls/women are VERY different in this way from guys.
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PostSubject: Re: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   January 17th 2009, 1:24 am

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Urs wrote:
HYdraMStar wrote:
Why else would she contact you?

I would wager for the same reasons why a man would do that, and "feeling bad about what they did" has nothing to do with it.


And you'd more likely then not lose the bet.

I wish you were right, but of that I highly doubt.
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PostSubject: Re: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   January 17th 2009, 4:27 am

Some Woman are just as fickle as men.
some Woman are just as choosy as men.
Some Woman are just as pig head as men.
You just gotta find the right woman.
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PostSubject: Re: It's Been So Long[Explicit Lyrics]   June 29th 2011, 6:14 pm

I must say, this is exactly what's happening in my life lol. except I'm the girl telling him to go die. :]
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