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When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: System Check[Explicity Language]   February 5th 2009, 3:17 pm

The usual metal song from me.

System Check

You never understood
You never listened
Why are you such a f#$king b!tch?
You never put my condition first
You never gave me special treatment
But all of your other silly little friends
and do the same sh!t I do and it's new for
you


^chorus^
You're a b!tch
You're a F@#ker
Get you f@#king system checked
^chorus end^

Despite all that I say
I don't want waste my anger
on you, despite all the hate
I don't want waste my time
with you
It's true, it's true I hate you
I don't wanna ever talk to you
again

^chorus repeat^
^chorus end^

It's true, yes so true
That I wanted to become
your friend I wanted to
be in the click
I wanted to be able to
be someone in the eyes
of you
but I can't do what you want
me to because you never accepted
what I did...unless I was already one your
friends

^chorus repeat^
^chorus end^
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