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PostSubject: Lives Underground   March 20th 2009, 3:21 pm

Lives Underground

I dwell under a rock underground
Where my fire spits out of my brain
I am the worshiped and forgotten
And I will find you

*guitar starts with a very dirty metal grunge sound...soon after bass follows*

You think you can get away with losing your essence
You think that I won't touch, won't break won't take you and won't take me
but we have lives underground and we have to live in our wondering hell
Cause we made this, we made it, we created it
We now have to live with consequences

^chorus^
Lives underground
Forgotten realm
Forgiving is all necessary
To live without consequence
^chorus end^

To think that now I'm here
And you were there all along
makes spin in desolate gloom
cause I don't know where I go
or where to go
Or for where to find me

^chorus repeats^
^chorus ends^

*music plays for a while*

Lives underground

A realm of desolation

Wasteland

Forgetfulness

Where are we now, now, now

*music continues*

^chorus repeats^
^chorus end^

*music plays for a while again until song ends*
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